先给下面一篇考场作文评分:《逆流挣扎也是在前进》,32分。阅卷教师给的判分依据:写得平平淡淡,没有出彩的地方,素材单薄,语言平易,结构单调。我们的阅卷教师习惯了“大场面”:拿历史长河的人物掩饰内容的苍白,用满纸的华丽语言掩饰认知的肤浅:我梦到了,苏东坡在我梦境里的那略一皱眉。是初来黄州任知府时,满目的荒芜也敌不过心底的荒凉的那点心酸,是“世事一场大梦,人生几度新凉?”的凄凉;是东坡心 Give yourself an exam composition score below: “Countercurrent struggles are also on the move,” 32 points. Scoring teachers to the verdict based on: plain writing faint, there is no color place, thin material, language easy, monotonous structure. Our scotch teachers are accustomed to “big scenes”: take the pale characters of history to hide the paleness of content, and cover up the superficiality of cognition in the gorgeous language of full paper: I dreamed that Su Dongpo frowned a little bit in my dream. Is Huangzhou Prefecture when he first came to the prefect, the desolation everywhere but also the heart of the desolate that bitter heart, is “a world of dreams, life several degrees cool?” Desolation; Dongpo heart