学生在记叙文写作中最常见的毛病有三,一是三言两语写不透,二是平铺直叙无波澜,三是视点混乱看不清。现分别举出一些例子来加以剖析,说说克服和纠正的办法。 治三言两语写不透 有的学生记一件事情,总是语焉不详,写不具体。有位学生写自己带病在公共汽车上让座。开头说一通“旭日东升”、“朝霞满天”之类的废 The most common problems students have in narrative writing are three. One is that three words and two languages ​​are impervious, the other is that there are no waves in the flat and straight lines, and the third is the confusion in the point of view. Now give some examples to analyze and talk about ways to overcome and correct. There is no way to write a sentence in two languages. Some students remember one thing. They are always uncertain and are not specific. One student wrote himself to take a seat on the bus. At the beginning, he said that the “rising of the rising sun” and “ascending sky” and the like