学生作文存在着多种毛病 :作文中所写人物苍白 ,缺少真情实感 ;作文题材雷同 ,所写内容杜撰虚假 ;作文过于注重技巧 ,作文不是出于内容表达的需要 ,而是为技巧而技巧……分析这些毛病产生的原因 ,不难发现 ,有学生缺少社会实践、生活贫乏的原因 ,有作文教学的弊端的原因等等 , There are many problems with the students’ composition: the characters in the composition are pale and lack real feelings; the subject matter is similar and the content is false; the composition is too skill-oriented, and the composition is not for the need of content expression, but for skill and skill... ...Analyzing the causes of these problems, it is not difficult to find that some students lack the reasons for social practice, poor living, and the reasons for the disadvantages of writing teaching, etc.