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在我过去四十余年的生涯中,冬的情味尝得最深刻的,要算十年前移居白马湖的时候了。[开门见山,直接点题。突出两个时间概念,表明这里的“冬”最不寻常,以引起读者的注意和思念。]十年以来,白马湖已成了一个小村落,当我移居的时候,还是一片荒野。春晖中学的新建筑巍然矗立于湖的那一面,湖的这一面的山脚下是小小的几间新平屋,住着我和刘君心如两家。此外两三里没有人烟。一家人于阴历十一月下旬从热闹的杭州移居这荒凉的山野,宛如投身于极带中。[写“荒凉”。为下文铺垫。]
In the past forty years or more in my career, the winter weather tasted the most profound. It was time to move to Baima Lake ten years ago. [Open the door, point directly. Highlighting the concept of two times shows that the “winter” here is the most unusual to draw readers’ attention and thoughts. In the past ten years, Baima Lake has become a small village. When I moved, it was still a wilderness. The new building of Chunhui Middle School stands on the side of the lake, and the small mountain houses at the foot of this side of the lake are home to me and Liu Junxin. In addition there is no smoking in two or three years. The family moved to the wilderness from the lively Hangzhou in the late November of the lunar calendar. [Write “Desolation”. Prepare for the following. ]