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近几年,参加湖北省语文高考阅卷和质量分析,接触到数以千计的作文试卷,给人总的印象是,审题准确、立意新颖、选材恰当、结构完整、语言流畅的优秀作文可谓难得百里挑一.大多数考生写议论文一般存在以下毛病: 一、对于提供材料,设置情景,限制范围的“条件作文”,不善于利用材料提炼主题. 二、选择的论据不能论证论点,出现游离状态. 三、在构思立意方面,思维定势化,思路不开阔,见解缺乏新颖感. 四、不适应多种文体交叉的综合表现手法.
In recent years, he has participated in the examination and quality analysis of the Chinese college entrance examinations in Hubei Province, and has reached out to thousands of essay papers. His general impression is that the outstanding essays with accurate examination questions, novel ideas, proper material selection, complete structure, and smooth language are rare. One hundred mile. Most of the candidates writing dissertations generally have the following problems: First, for the provision of materials, set the scene, limit the scope of the “conditional composition”, not good at using the material to refine the topic. Second, the arguments of the argument can not argue arguments, there is a free state. Third, in terms of conception, thinking is fixed, ideas are not broadened, and there is a lack of novelty in opinion. Fourth, it does not adapt to a variety of stylistic crossovers.