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这篇文章主要记录了作者在一个早晨抱着耍儿站在窗前的所见所思,文字清新,笔触细腻,充满对亲情、对生命的赞叹之情。文章的情节很简单:早晨,抱起要儿,站在窗前,看窗外的风景。但文章中的细节很丰富,使简单的情节变得丰满生动。第1段中描写耍儿动作和微笑的细节,第2、3段中描写窗外一位母亲陪伴孩子玩耍的细节,第4段中描写自己怀抱着孩子时的心理活动细节,都较精美,充满令人回味的
This article mainly records the author in a morning holding a child standing in front of the window thinking, fresh words, delicate brushstrokes, full of affection, the admiration of life. The plot is simple: in the morning, pick up, stand in front of the window and look out the window. But the details of the article is very rich, so that simple plots become plump and vivid. The first paragraph describes the details of playing moves and smiling children. The second and third paragraphs describe the details of a mother playing with her children outside the window. The fourth describes the details of her psychological activity when she carries her children. Both are beautiful and full Memorable