审视各地中考作文评分标准,都要求:中心明确、内容具体、情感健康。而纵观不少学生的作文,初看起来也是洋洋洒洒,中心明确。但仔细阅读文章,却显得平庸空洞,缺乏感染力。究其原因,不乏视角的选择不够新颖,结构的安排不够曲折……但缺乏对素材进行细节雕琢,也是一个重要的原因。以下面两篇学生的习作为例: Examining the grading standards for secondary school essay examinations requires that the center be clear, content specific, and emotionally healthy. While looking at the composition of many students, at first glance it is also eloquent center clear. But read the article carefully, but it seems mediocre and empty, lack of appeal. The reason, there is no lack of novelty in the choice of perspective, the structure of the arrangement is not enough twists and turns ... but the lack of detail carved material, but also an important reason. Take the following two students’ assignments as an example: