编辑要爱抠字眼,对于错别字和病句要敏感,这是需要培养的职业习惯。我择取了一些看稿当中摘录的病句,愿与读者共同切磋。例1 飞机是在大气中飞行的运载工具,有着许多的特殊要求,决定了飞机机加零件的下列特性。分析例句中缺少主语。该句子共有三个单句。只有一个主语,即“飞机”。对于前面两个单句。主语都是“飞机”,因此第二个单句可以省略。但第三个单句主语应该是“特殊要求”,如果这里省略,使人误以为沿袭前面的主语,造成意思不清。应在“决定”前面加上指示代词“这”作主语。例2 监控计算机是监督各机床的工作,并对各机床分配任务。分析例句中谓语重复。“是”和“监督”、 Editors love to pull key words, for typos and disease sentences to be sensitive, which is the need to cultivate professional habits. I chose some excerpts from the draft sentences, is willing to work with readers. Example 1 An airplane is a vehicle that is flying in the atmosphere and has many special requirements that determine the following characteristics of aircraft-mounted parts. Analysis of the lack of subject in the example sentence. There are three sentences in this sentence. There is only one subject, “airplane.” For the first two sentences. Subjects are “aircraft”, so the second sentence can be omitted. However, the third single-sentence subject should be “special requirement”. If omitted here, people mistakenly believe that it follows the previous subject and causes confusion. The decree should be preceded by the demonstrative pronoun “this”. Example 2 The supervisory computer supervises the work of each machine tool and assigns tasks to each machine tool. Analyze the predicate in the example sentence. “Yes” and “supervision”