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非马的诗俊瘦而劲挺,别具一格,自成一家。很非马,我谓之非马体。非马擅长截图,他的诗有鲜明的画面感。最简单通俗的文字经他的手一调遣,诗便立体了起来。如他的《共伞》:共用一把伞/才发觉彼此的差距//但这样我俯身吻你/因你努力踮起脚尖/而倍感欣喜这首诗完美地体现了非马所倡导的现代诗形式。语言朴素,精致,每个字适得其所。是非马情诗的代表作之一,也是非马艺术世界浓缩的精华。五行,二小节,三十四个字,用白描的
Non-horse poem Jun thin and strong, unique, self-contained. Very non-horse, I call non-horse body. Non-horse good at screenshots, his poems have a clear sense of the picture. The simplest and most popular words are dispatched by his hand, and the poem is three-dimensional. Such as his “umbrella”: sharing an umbrella / only noticing the difference between each other // but this way I bent over kissing you / tiptoe / as you work hard to make me feel happy Modern poem form. The language is simple and exquisite, each word is right. Is one of the masterpieces of non-horse love poetry, but also the essence of non-horse art world concentration. Five lines, two bars, thirty-four words, with a white sketch