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【作文材料】阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的记叙文。我做了那么多改变,只是为了我心中不变。【现状分析】一、班级作文现状分析(一)卷面书写拿5分和4分的各8人;拿3分的19人;拿3分以下的14人,其中拿0分的2人,分别是陈同学和石同学。值得一提的是,石同学仅是因为最后时间仓促,把标题写得很是潦草,而正文部分可以拿到3分以上。(二)作文得分(不含书写)得50分以上的14人;得42—49.5分的4人;不及格的3人,
[Composition materials] Read the following materials, according to the requirements of writing a narrative of not less than 800 words. I made so many changes, just to my heart the same. Analysis of the status quo First, the analysis of the status quo of class essay (a) the volume of writing to take 5 points and 4 points of the 8; take 3 points of 19 people; take 3 points below 14 people, including 0 points for 2 people, Chen students and students are stone. It is worth mentioning that the stone students just because of the last rush, the title is very scribbled, while the body part can get 3 points or more. (2) Composition score of 14 (excluding writing) score of 50 or more; 4 of 42-49.5 mark; 3 failing,