《鞋》这篇微型小说是高中语文第四册作为供料作文的阅读材料,读了反觉得落笔不凡,好在哪里呢?先从这篇微型小说材料的取与舍方面来说,它以微小的篇幅,准确地摄取了一个片断,一个镜头,就是作者对小说中主人公一大个子军人的刻画,舍其形而取其神。要是让一般人写,可能就少不了大段的肖像描写了,从人物的容貌、体态到衣饰都不免来一番工笔描绘,而本文则不然,它只是通过典型的人物对 The miniature novel “Shoes” is a reading material for the fourth grade of high school Chinese language as a reading material for reading materials. When you read it, you feel that it is a good thing to write down. What is the good thing? From the aspect of the acquisition of this miniature novel material, it is The tiny space accurately captures a fragment. One lens is the writer’s portrayal of a hero of a hero in the novel. If you want to let the average person write, it may be that a large part of the portrait is depicted. From the appearance and posture of the character to the clothing, there is a certain work brushwork. However, this article is not true. It only uses typical characters.